ProfessorFlash's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Space Shooter!]

not perfect

It was pretty ok. What I dont understand why you make the flash size X if you are going to use only 80% of X to show the game. By that I mean the white space at left and right looks ugly.

The gameplay was pretty good, but why do you use such weird controls? i,j,k,l? :P Stick with the arrow keys or w,a,s,d.

If you just could improve the graphics then this game would be good. Hire an artist if you cant do it yourself?

Pharanphalia responds:

Thanks for the advice.
Ill probABLY make a version 2!

[13 Days in Hell]

okay

Need's a headshot. These kind of games are nothing if there is no difference if you shoot the enemy to the balls or to the head.

[vector-a-voider]

nice try but

You need to remove 90% of the levels in stage1 and add the type of levels you had in stage 2. Only reason I even played to get to stage2 was because you could cheat. The stage1 levels are soooooo boring, and on top of it you make players go through them TWICE.
Only thing I liked was the graphics. I started to like the game a bit on stage2, but then the game ended. So overall this is pretty generic and not good mouse avoider and you obviously didnt put much effort into this (3 days aint enough dude).

[Arkanoid Game]

yea

This is what it says it is. Nothing special. The graphics are good. This could use some music. Now the bad: I dont like how the bricks are destroyed in a delay. Remove that and destroy them quickly. Another major issue is that it doesnt matter with what part of the pad you hit the ball, the ball always goes the same way. It should be that if you hit for example with the right edge, the ball should go sharply to the right.

[Rotate360]

bugged

You cant rotate anything in this game. So the whole game is a bomb. Try again with a working version.

[Super Mouse Game 5]

uh oh, this aint good

I dont want to offend you, but I cant keep quiet either. This kind of mouse avoider, if it doesnt get blammed, useally gets below 2.00 rating. This has above 3.00. My question, how in the hell? You must have a lot of friends, or people just looked at the title and thought fift attemt cant be bad and voted for more than this really deserves. You also say you spend a lot of time on this, how much is long? 2-3 hours is not long by normal stantards...

Now, the game. Levels seem hand drawn. You just took the brush, color red, and drew the levels in 5 minutes. Music, you found a "funny" song, and put it in the game. It doesnt fit at all. Short review for the game, because there was nothing else. No obsticles, not even the oh-so-common windmill, nothing, absolutely nothing. If you really spend a lot of time on this, it is without a doubt that you spend 99% of that time into learning the action script behind a mouse avoider game. The levels, with the very simplistic graphics, couldnt have taken anyone longer than 5 minutes.

Im still amazed about the rating...anyway, Im going to vote fairly on this. 1/10, 1/5. One point for the attempt since you are clearly a beginner in flash.

Flashsubmit responds:

First i didn't hand draw the grafics, but on , what one level, and i don't have alot of friends voting on it, thanks for just jumping to that conclusion. I spent about 4-6 hours on it, and worked hard, sure i forgot some stuff, and the mouse isn't great, and if you don't like the music, turn it down. Im sorry that you don't like it but, please don't just jump to conclusions, i hate when people do that.

[Helicopter 2.0]

how did this get through?

There is no game. Just two green bars and the score running bottom left. How in the blue hell did this pass?

"Blocks and obstacles might be added later on.
Music and/or sfx might be added later."

Are you kidding with that? You submit something that you just started 5 minutes ago. And you just MIGHT add something to it? MIGHT?! MIGHT?!?!?!?

Well there is the best flash every week, so there has to be turd of the week aswell. This one is a good canditate for the turd of the week.

[Mouse Avoider #4527]

ummm

Not bad, except its very short and easy. Also, do you know how to do other obsticles than the windmill and 'moving block'? :P Judging from this game you dont. Get some different challenges. The music was ok.

[Maze 2]

pleh

It's a basic mouseavoider, what's there to say. Well the graphics were bad, you really took a shortcut on that one. The music was awfull, do you want people to NOT play the game?
Improve the graphics and remove/replace the music and it can be ok mouse avoider.

[POGOboy]

nice game

I actually enjoyed it. Good idea, only problem is that its very easy. You should limit the drawing somehow to make it more challenging. Since now you can draw as much as you want, its very easy.
Good job with the game.

jaythorpe responds:

thanks